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[haigaka]

焼き捨てて日記の灰のこれだけか (1930)

якисутэтэ никки но хаи но корэ дакэ ка


焼き捨てる - сжигать (burn [up]), сгорать
日記 - дневник
灰 - пепел, зола
これ (此れ) - это
だけ (丈) - только, лишь

до:
These few ashes / Are all that remain / Of my diary? (Tr. by John Stevens)
now they’re burned / these are all the ashes / from my diaries? (Tr. by Burton Watson)
Burning my old diary, / Ashes - / Only this much? (Tr. by Okami)
*Santoka burned the diaries from his first trip because he was ashamed of what he had written.

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пепел дневника, что сжёг
всего лишь?

вариант: и только?